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Re: Fetus
Oh wow, Tim I think this my most favorite of anything I've seen of yours. In lieu of sounding like a gawking schoolgirl or like Imp, I will keep this ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Update on Stuff and Crits
Yeah, really descriptive there, I know. So, I have 5 weeks before I go to Paris and meet my friend who is going to go a travelling with me. We ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Divining Catacombs (Edit: Second Draft)
Xan, no problemo dear. :D Colier, this certainly needs a lot of work, thank you for commenting on it. (Pssst - go look at some of my others, they are ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Divining Catacombs (Edit: Second Draft)
EDIT: Second draft. All comments, crits, and such welcome. Divining Catacombs I. venery Winged Hermes gave chase but missed the window of opportunity as Apollo sigh-slipped into her coffin. the ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Mercy Burning
Firstly dear, I would like to acquaint you with my critiquing style: when I critique, I do a full analysis of the piece and go pretty indepth. So, that's that, ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Lovekills_period says hi
Welcome to YWS m'dear! I heart(ed) creative writing projects when I had the class last year. Feel free, if you have any questions or anything else to PM me, (or ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: With Six Legs
Hi, hon. I'm back for another ramble for you. I am not going to go into strict specifics or talk about the things everyone else has touched on. So here ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: New Play (Play Number 2) Unlimited Rule
Hmm... First, I noticed a few grammatical errors, mis-capitalizations, full-stops and commas missing. It disrupted the flow quite a bit, and in some places made the script very chunky. I ...
May 10, 2006 -
Re: New Playwriter says Hello.
Ooo playwriter! Welcome m'dear to YWS, if it is a late welcoming from me. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions. I shall go check out your ...
May 10, 2006 -
Re: Salve
Yay, latin, brownie points indeed. Welcome m'dear to YWS. Procrastinators unite! If you have any questions feel free to PM me with anything. and as the lovely smaur said: Which ...
May 10, 2006 -
Re: Semi new member
Ditto what Dusky said. Welcome anyways m'dear even if it is a bit late. I love your name too. :smt023 Cheerios, CL.
May 10, 2006 -
Re: Allow me to introduce myself
Welcome m'dear to YWS. If you have any questions, about anything please feel free to PM me. Ta, CL
May 10, 2006 -
Re: Horses! Horses! And... Horses!
Yay caffeine! It's a glorious thang. Eighteenth century America, western would be the way to go. Also, note, ladies would not be riding in a western saddle, but sidesaddle - ...
May 10, 2006 -
Re: Paw-Paw Picking
Paw-Paw Picking For Jamie Next to my pillowed head, your hair tousled, images of bramble bird nest. You never slept straight, your long limbs tossed about and bent weirdly and ...
May 10, 2006 -
Re: Battlestar Galactica
What smaur said! Empathically what she said. (Edit: I do believe that is supposed to be Emphatically, you dolt- so much for being coherent) Cyclons own you. You know that ...
May 10, 2006
